Sky-City Reviews

Review for "Obsidian Flame"


Owner: Adrian/ with staff
Site name: Obsidian Flame
Site url: http://www.obsidianflame.com/

Grading

First I review in a format that is really not about each section but your site as a whole. I look at your Mainpage and layout, Orginality, Quality and Organization. I will also make suggestions. 100-90 is an A no +A or -A. 89-80 is an B. 79 to 70 is an C. 69-60 is a D. Anything 59 and below is an F. Grades are weighted. I do rerates when you fix the problems but I still keep your original grade up.

Review


Main page/layout: 80% I like the textures you used in you layout, the brushses are also wonderful. The color scheme is nice but a little dull. The same thing goes for the coding, I can also see that the headers are not the same size in firefox.
Your blogs can be nice and funny, the do get a little boring hwen you talk about how long you hav not updated and how sorry you are for not being around. To avoid this simply blog every other day, or even every week would be an improvment.

Orginality:80% I do not see any of the generic content I usually see at websites so you are good there. However I do see content that does not have a lot of thought put in to it. As a Visitors I want to be wowed by dramatic use of colors, textures, and brushes. I can see most of that in you layout but not in your content. Your content is by no means not creative or average, its just not wowing me.

Quality:90% I can see Qulaity, none of your graphics look rushed. They just don't show much creativity. Your use of color can be somewhat boring, but you are on the right track. Just keep going and try to incorpate more of the Quality that goes with creativity.

Organization:100% I can very easily navigate through your site. I like the chatbox at the bottom where people can leave short comments that have nothing to do with the blogs. You get an A+ in this catagory!

Overall: 83% Your website is doing very well! If you keep doing what you are doing your website will slowly improve. If you want your site to get better fast start using better and darker colors in your layouts instead of the icy tones. Personally I think your site really has what it takes to be a very popualr website later down the road.