Sky-City Reviews

Review for "Valley Fire"


Owner:Tyler
site name: Valley Fire
site url: http://valleyfire.winter-rain.com/

Grading

First I review in a format that is really not about each section but your site as a whole. I look at your Mainpage and layout, Orginality, Quality and Organization. I will also make suggestions. 100-90 is an A no +A or -A. 89-80 is an B. 79 to 70 is an C. 69-60 is a D. Anything 59 and below is an F. Grades are weighted. I do rerates when you fix the problems but I still keep your original grade up.

Review


Main page/layout: 70% Your layout shows that you have enmours creativity. However you coding and the size of the layout make to look very messing.

If you look at the screenshot that I took of your site you will notice how small your layout looks. I only have a medium sized montier, so I don't want to imagine what the layout would look like a large one. Your layout should take up layout of the screen, and right now it takes up 1/3 of it.

The css that you coded for your layout does not help one bit. For instance your links and your text are very hard to read not only because of the size but also because of the color. The scrollbar in your blog is a pain, I would perfer you made the layout a little bigger. Another thing is that the 'Journal' page is very unorganized. I would suggest getting rid of some of those links to clean it up.

Orginality:100% Based on your content and your layout I can see that you put a lot of thought into what you do. You do not have a lot of the genric website content, you do not have a lot of celebirty content (this shows that you can make other styles), and I don't see anything that I wouldn't use, or that someone else wouldn't use.

Quality:90% There is so much qulaity in your work! However when I said that I couldn't see anythind I wouldn't use or that somebody else wouldn't use that doesn't mean that there are things I would get rid of. For example your music codes are something only a few slect people might use. Also some of you neopets graphics don't show much qulatity.

Organization:60% I can't very easily navigate through your site. I think you should make a bigger layout and make sure that your pages are less cluttered.

Overall: 80% Your site is wonderful! Even thought you have a few things to fix I can tell that you are going somewhere. Overall I would suggest adding a new layout, redoing your css, and getting rid of some content.